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not hearing any lyrics if there were any . Very poor recording .

IvyPoison responds:

There aren't any on there yet since it's only the intro, and I know where I recorded it I didn't have the proper recording equipment . However, I will be recording it again this is technically the rough draft of a short preview

Love this intro . Good job

Now lets wait like half a year for season 2 ;(

FenixB-dogg responds:

:'( I know ...it's so sad. JUST MAKE THE EPISODES! lol

I really like the harmonies with the pads and analogs .

Although try to use more drum patters or stop drums for mellow moments

Schematist responds:

Thanks so much for the analysis DJGubkafish! Will work on that for next time!

This is actually pretty good considering that we are not professionals here .

The only thing i didn't like is that you didn't create enough patterns .

Other than that melody and progression was pretty good .

I like way you build the melody with ambiance .

It feels like the build up is the only thing here though . Should have made middle longer and maybe add some beat .

ChaotixMachine responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean. I'll probably go back someday and finish it, but I just couldn't find a good transition at the time.

I feel like pads don't fall on the right key making it difficult to catch the melody .

As far as I look at music there is no progression here because you tried too many runs and they seem to come at random.

There are some good ideas here but it is almost like you stuck couple different songs together .

Also remember when I said that I don't like my techno music to sound like rock . This sounds nothing like techno to me to be honest .

Sorry for harsh words man .

bdog705 responds:

i just wanna clarify that you can say it sucks if you think it does, i don't get butthurt when people say its a piece of shit
anyway
if you read the description then you would know that i've been dealing with a lot of writers block
so making anything in general is quite frustrating
i know you dont like that style to be mixed but personally,
my 2nd favorite musician is celldweller and most inspiration i get is from him and he writes rock or metal mixed with electro, techno, dubstep etc.
i like making random melodies and throwing them together though too :P
i cant make every song sound golden, hell no one can but i know none of my songs are near gold or even silver, my point is....my music sucks :P XD
thanks for the review though!

I like it .

Although it would be better if you had 4 step pads in background instead of static .

I make a lot of solo runs myself but for me this is a bit too simple .

Its ok if you start slow but the middle should be a little more complex .

Although i think digital version of this song with some lairs would be much better .

Good effort but could use some improvement .

reminds me sunlonger . Very aesthetic

Recording is pretty low quality but its ok . Good recording tools are very expensive

You should add some pads in background and maybe try on removing those squaks

nookierobber responds:

I'm between houses so money is currently tight, Hoping to get some better mic equipment once everything is sorted out, thank you for listening! I appreciate your input :)

It does the job setting dark atmosphere . Sometimes less is more

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