I like the synthetic quality of this track and vibrations . Although i think you could have channel that main melody a little more and maybe play around with it a bit .
I like the synthetic quality of this track and vibrations . Although i think you could have channel that main melody a little more and maybe play around with it a bit .
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still very limited in my music-making ability, so I'll see what I can do to improve on this in the future. ;)
I like the quality of the music and swings but something is missing . At about 1:00 i wish you would brake it down and add a faster drum pattern . Then after about 30 seconds you can transition back into regular pace .
Even though its house music its always a good idea to add more variations
I think this is also missing the point stylistically! It's not house! Thanks for taking the time to hear it and comment!
I really like combination with groove and choir ahhs . Even though it is kind of off-beat i think it works is some strange way .
Actually need to favorite this one just cuz i like the creativity here
I love your review. Thanks for listening, man. Enjoy!
I like a lot of the techniques you used here which shows that you trying
Well made but i just don't like the lead melody . Not catchy enough
Hey,
the melody kinda differs from my other projects, it has a little sad touch to it. After the buildup it also was a little hard for me to continue (It took about a year for it to be finished) so it's not the best possible.
Anyways, thanks for the review :D, stuff like this keeps me motivated^^
Greets,
Fabyy
It has a little bit of Nintendo vibe . Personally not my style of music but it has that video game quality which i often hear inside arcade and platforming games .
Yeah, I've found it does have a Nintendo vibe to it. Personally, I love Nintendo music; it has a very unique vibe to it, but I like it :) Anyway, thank you for your feedback :)
As a trance composer myself i know how difficult it can be to find proper vst to make trance music .
Try T-Force Alpha or Firebird .
I can hear some decent mood swings but they are clustered with excess noises from crapy vsts
haha i was experimenting with Molekular by native instrument a lot in this one thats prob it ill pay attention to that next time!
well i feel that you decided to ignore all the rules of making music . I know you can make it properly so i am a little confused of what you trying to learn from this
0.00-0.40 its a same loop with 2 chords . Its repetitive rather than innovative
Transitions are usually what makes or breaks the song and you also ignored those completely .
I would suggest to create new combinations of sound rather than trying to be radical because it will probably come across as unprofessional
i was using FL studio and im not the best but I've gotten better and I've already made much better songs then this I just haven't posted them yet I figured it would sound terrible but I definitely have been improving
it almost feels like mix between trance and dubstep which is what i like to see . I am glad that you don't use 2 step beat pattern for everything like some people .
Overall nice mix of genres . Even some ambient parts there
thanks! dubstep isn't my favorite genre of music, I agree its almost as if no effort is put into it if there's 2 steps or even 3 it all depends I guess also I always try and throw in a bit of ambience into a song as much as I can really mainly because I've always enjoyed ambient music and some of my best songs are ambient, thanks for the review!
i dig it .
It is a little painful to the ears because of excess razor noises so just watch which vsts you using .
Glad you like it!
I'll be more careful with my choice of synths from now on.
pretty spooky . I just wish you didn't use strings at 0:40 because i just see it more as ambient track for horror game .
Ooh, that's a pretty interesting interpretation. I never saw it that way, but I can see how you might think that. I think I added strings because in my mind, the melody wasn't spooky, it was exotic, and strings were how I felt would be express that. But an ambient horror track does make sense too! Thanks for listening!
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