Overall i think you put a lot of effort in this . Although because you change pace so often it may be difficult to apprehend the melody .
Try to hold the melody for about 4 loops before you transition .
Overall i think you put a lot of effort in this . Although because you change pace so often it may be difficult to apprehend the melody .
Try to hold the melody for about 4 loops before you transition .
dude...you cant hold the melody for soo long in drum and bass because
it gets boring,you must do a vast dynamic range of sounds to hold the crowd
in head all the time,this is drum and bass mate.
Try to concentrate on melody rather than pads . Progression in the music was a bit wird . Breakdown of melody and ending are missing .
There is have too much excess sound . I know its difficult to time pads properly which is why you need to look for better vst or limit their use.
analog melody also needs more variations and lairs .
sorry just trying to be constructive
can't get much better with chiptune music . Now you just need to travel back in time to put in on a NES game
That would be awesome! :D
Thanks!
Perfect song for the newgrounds . Its like the closing time at the bar and there last person drunk to death .
sexy
EE ka e kakako EE ka e kakako
I don't know wtf it means but my butt is moving
very nice progression . As energetic track for a fast pace atmosphere it works very well .
Which parts of this song did you make? Music and singing or one or the other ?
The atmosphere feels very suspenseful I am really digging it . Singing sounds pretty emotions too although i can't really tell XD Those guitar and pad leads are F@cken great too
I think I like . ...... I like it
I made everything. The lyrics were created via Vocaloid, and everything else was done in fl studio. I'm glad you like it. I poured pretty much everything I had into this track.
Joined on 12/11/13