I like how you use silence and resets but i think that main melody is not groovy and long enough . Also try to have more beat patterns because over 6 minutes it gets very repetitive
I like how you use silence and resets but i think that main melody is not groovy and long enough . Also try to have more beat patterns because over 6 minutes it gets very repetitive
Yeah, I can agree with that. Admittedly I got a bit lazy with songwriting for this one, I wasn't really feeling it as much as the others. Thanks for the review!
try adding chord in the background
If you use 4 different notes in pad vsts you can create a pattern
Right now it sounds too leveled so theres no progression
I like the build up but i think it got a bit repetitive
just add some variations with choirs and it'll be flawless
the beat doesn't synchronize well with melody
i almost feel like it would work better without beat as ambient song
1:04 , try to work the melody instead of sharp drops
I see what you mean by the beat not synching I didn't notice that
I kinda wanted the sharp drops mainly because it was supposed to mix with the original yellow mist which had vocals that's also why the drums were added to make the beat because the vocals were soft and anything else other then those drums would make it sound less of a song and more like a really creepy song
This could work in a Silent Hill game . Why would anyone listen to it otherwise is beyond me
I kinda like the melody even though VST choices are strange
Its a nice upbeat (happy) and could work in happy game
Thanks for taking the time to give your thoughts :)
i felt that the song was one dimensional the hole way through .
Try to work the melody and not cut it short too often. Also try to change beat pace if you make music longer than minute
its done well but its 1/3 of the song though .
If the rest will have similar quality 5 starts man . 3 for now
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