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DjGubkafish

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I like how you use silence and resets but i think that main melody is not groovy and long enough . Also try to have more beat patterns because over 6 minutes it gets very repetitive

Smitsy responds:

Yeah, I can agree with that. Admittedly I got a bit lazy with songwriting for this one, I wasn't really feeling it as much as the others. Thanks for the review!

try adding chord in the background

If you use 4 different notes in pad vsts you can create a pattern

Right now it sounds too leveled so theres no progression

I like the build up but i think it got a bit repetitive

just add some variations with choirs and it'll be flawless

the beat doesn't synchronize well with melody

i almost feel like it would work better without beat as ambient song

1:04 , try to work the melody instead of sharp drops

bdog705 responds:

I see what you mean by the beat not synching I didn't notice that
I kinda wanted the sharp drops mainly because it was supposed to mix with the original yellow mist which had vocals that's also why the drums were added to make the beat because the vocals were soft and anything else other then those drums would make it sound less of a song and more like a really creepy song

This could work in a Silent Hill game . Why would anyone listen to it otherwise is beyond me

I kinda like the melody even though VST choices are strange

Its a nice upbeat (happy) and could work in happy game

Udalix responds:

Thanks for taking the time to give your thoughts :)

good shit

Demon-Slayer12 responds:

nothing like a good shit.

i felt that the song was one dimensional the hole way through .

Try to work the melody and not cut it short too often. Also try to change beat pace if you make music longer than minute

I like it but it could have been better

Make sure that second guitar doesn't cluster the first .

sonlounger-white sand ... How the lead guitar works with pads . Don't want too many patterns

its done well but its 1/3 of the song though .

If the rest will have similar quality 5 starts man . 3 for now

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