DjGubkafish's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Indoctrination Redux]

Pretty sweat . I especially like utilizing of pads in this song . Also lots of swing here and there and they all seem to be in pace with beat .

Although you may have overused razor lead because its a bit difficult to follow the song . I think it would be better if there were some tender moments just to give listeners a brake .

TheComet responds:

razor lead? I built all of my synths from scratch in Harmor, no presets here! ^^

Thanks for the review!

[The Signalist]

2:35> don't really go together . You should stay more consistent to the original melody

Also when you transition from build up to brakedown try to add another pattern with main instrument instead of just adding background noise otherwise you playing the same melody for 2 minutes .

The music is crisp but it just feels porrly put together sorry don't hate :(

OcularNebula responds:

yeah, very on point - those are basically most of the reasons I was hesitant to come back to this one, and it's so hard to just flat out scrap parts of the song that don't work together, but sometimes you just have to do it, I guess

anyway, thanks for listening!

[End of Days]

Try to stay away from low quality sounds like at 0:22 . I would have preferred if you carried that melody at the start and build lairs around it .

Voladous responds:

I understand what you are saying and I thank you for your input. I didn't want to keep the same melody throughout the entire song because I tried doing that for one of my other songs (one that I removed from Newgrounds) and it was terrible. Thank you for spending time to post a review to my song. It really helps me a lot. :)

[Temporal Divide]

I like the synthetic quality of this track and vibrations . Although i think you could have channel that main melody a little more and maybe play around with it a bit .

FateModified responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I'm still very limited in my music-making ability, so I'll see what I can do to improve on this in the future. ;)

[Taken at Birth]

To be honest i don't feel like you are skilled yet but your creativity alone makes music interesting .

I feel that you putting lots of emotion into songs which is important attribute of a true musician .

I think you will be crazy good in few years . Good luck

[Anti Night Club]

I like the quality of the music and swings but something is missing . At about 1:00 i wish you would brake it down and add a faster drum pattern . Then after about 30 seconds you can transition back into regular pace .

Even though its house music its always a good idea to add more variations

jawalker213 responds:

I think this is also missing the point stylistically! It's not house! Thanks for taking the time to hear it and comment!

[The Rose]

T.T awwwwww i can't listen . too sad

[Beauty]

I really like combination with groove and choir ahhs . Even though it is kind of off-beat i think it works is some strange way .

Actually need to favorite this one just cuz i like the creativity here

Godknown responds:

I love your review. Thanks for listening, man. Enjoy!

[End Of A Dream]

I like a lot of the techniques you used here which shows that you trying

Well made but i just don't like the lead melody . Not catchy enough

Fabyy responds:

Hey,
the melody kinda differs from my other projects, it has a little sad touch to it. After the buildup it also was a little hard for me to continue (It took about a year for it to be finished) so it's not the best possible.
Anyways, thanks for the review :D, stuff like this keeps me motivated^^

Greets,
Fabyy

["Personal Hatred".]

I think it does the job as ambient horror music

Although i would try not to put too many scratching noises because they ruin the atmosphere