DjGubkafish's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[False Reality]

actually i dig the atmosphere . not sure who voted 1 there . Some dick i am sure

[Club Composition II]

I'll be honest there are a lot of thing that need work

The main melody and background snares create unpleasant excess noise . So try looking for better quality vst instruments that don't do that .

You also need to add another lair next time . Something ambient in the background will do.

Whenever you looping melody try adding another extra pattern to create progression . Otherwise it can be very repetitive .

and sorry if i sound like a jerk

jawalker213 responds:

Thanks for your recommendations!

[Drifting Away]

overall i like all your music a lot .

Especially the way to stretch the melody making it it sort of a soundtrack for something

Like jie said i think the drums could use a bit more variety .

bdog705 responds:

thanks! believe it or not I try and model almost all of my songs after old command and conquer games and there music (I don't try and remake the songs themselves) I do this because its what first inspired me to start making music in the first place that's why some of my songs might sound like there soundtracks, ill try and use a different variety with other songs in my future songs

[Bail Before Catastrophe]

I feel like its missing a lair . You got beat,melody and background analog so maybe add a choir or a pad also .

BassMZero responds:

I know what you mean. I'm still learning the ins and outs of mixing, so when I had more layers, it began to become overwhelming. I simplified it for the sake of the listener. I appreciate you taking the time to share your opinion and thank you for the positive rating. :)

[Distance]

Thats a very cool take on the dubstep . Most people just make aggressive patterns that sound the same .
I like the melody and the relaxing mood . Just when you make something 5 minutes try adding a little more variation . Also i think i would prefer if buzz sound was a warm pad.

Ausghost responds:

Thanks a lot, really appreciate it. :)

[Back to Basics - Pressure]

There is a little bit of static in the background but hey most of us can't afford $500 on production toys .

Very aesthetic track

rainheart666787 responds:

Cheers dude, i have better equipment now but yea stuff is expensive!

[.:Heart Attack:.]

actually this would be great for a horror game that needs ambient background noise .

so i am not critiquing it as a song but more as a atmosphere set up

Mahjix responds:

Oh, boy. This audio file is so old!

I appreciate your comments; at least I have an idea of where this file was going because I honestly didn't know what more to do with it.

[Flute Man]

very nice build up

i just wish it was longer

[Macro]

try adding more lairs of the same melody with different instruments . Also always try to make more than one melody pattern so its not too repetitive

achunkofspaghetti responds:

I feel ya, this was one of those songs that you make wen you don't have any ideas, but thanks

[A Realm Between Worlds]

i like it overall but one thing you could improve on is adding long breakdown .

For example you could take one of those short grooves and make it 4 times longer . That way the song will have a middle instead of beeing consistent all the way through .