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Overall i think you put a lot of effort in this . Although because you change pace so often it may be difficult to apprehend the melody .

Try to hold the melody for about 4 loops before you transition .

Versety responds:

dude...you cant hold the melody for soo long in drum and bass because
it gets boring,you must do a vast dynamic range of sounds to hold the crowd
in head all the time,this is drum and bass mate.

Try to concentrate on melody rather than pads . Progression in the music was a bit wird . Breakdown of melody and ending are missing .

There is have too much excess sound . I know its difficult to time pads properly which is why you need to look for better vst or limit their use.

analog melody also needs more variations and lairs .

sorry just trying to be constructive

can't get much better with chiptune music . Now you just need to travel back in time to put in on a NES game

MetalRenard responds:

That would be awesome! :D
Thanks!

reminds be good all days playing 3d party nes games XD

sorry i am so sorry

i feel like drinking coconuts and swimming in the ocean

Too bad coconuts are too expensive and the only water next to me is a dirty lake .

I like it . Reminds me acoustic music by sunlounger . Very chill

For a disco setting it would work nicely

Although I would try to stay away from distortion a little bit . Its better to have a clear melody with some noise background but don't go over the top

fxarchive responds:

hahaha, that was the thing i had the most trouble deciding about :P

Perfect song for the newgrounds . Its like the closing time at the bar and there last person drunk to death .

sexy

EE ka e kakako EE ka e kakako

I don't know wtf it means but my butt is moving

very nice progression . As energetic track for a fast pace atmosphere it works very well .

Which parts of this song did you make? Music and singing or one or the other ?

The atmosphere feels very suspenseful I am really digging it . Singing sounds pretty emotions too although i can't really tell XD Those guitar and pad leads are F@cken great too

I think I like . ...... I like it

larrynachos responds:

I made everything. The lyrics were created via Vocaloid, and everything else was done in fl studio. I'm glad you like it. I poured pretty much everything I had into this track.

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