DjGubkafish's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Knox]For the Sun]

Ravitar guitar?

I can almos hear really cool melody shinning through but some notes are too silent . Maybe its just the type of guitar .

I probably would prefer this done through digital VST . I asume its live recording though

[Demonicity - Goodbye]

0:55 I would just remove those high jazzy vibes .

If you go for something relaxing you should stay away from noisy effects because they ruin the consistency .

The start was a bit boring i would add some soft pads maybe . Overall its nice but you lost some potential there.

Demonicity responds:

this is more like a chill out and i agree with u about the vibes :/.

[World's Call]

track has all the parts but it seems to lack emotion .

It dosen't feel happy or sad to me .

1:56 .. For example you could make a brakedown instead of just looping the melody over and over.

Try to smoothy change both background melody and analog lead to make song multidimensional .

Ixalon responds:

Hi!

Thanks for the review! That's just the main thing even I notice many times that these songs doesn't always have that feeling there. I usually try to think of something different to make, so the track has variation. I'll keep these things in mind when I start a new project someday.

Thanks for listening the song! :)

[Flow]

nice melody , i hate that vocoder though

TheNerdMC responds:

That's fine. Understandable. I was just experimenting with different sounds, and I used that Vocoder to see how it would be.

[Dark atmosphere]

to me . this sounds very happy XD

To be honest the vst choice wasn't right . If you listen to resident evil soundtracks they are more downbeat.

By itself its very repetetive . Even ambient music needs more runs .

EuphoriaSound responds:

VST Choice? What do you mean by that?
It doesnt matter what VST or Synth you use.

Anyways, this was just some quick shit made in a few minutes

[Give Me 3 Stars]

Ok XD

[Aguafina]

Aquafina as in water battle company XD

I also use sharp vibes for water feeling*

Very relaxing . I like it

jawalker213 responds:

hahaha you totally got why I named it that!

[Winter Weary]

I think this is perfect as it is . For this type of music over-the top is not really good .

Runs were pretty cool as well . You did a good job at staying consistent with melody progression .

There seem to be a lot of melody brakedowns . I assume you actually played this on piano . Respect

I don't know why you keep getting 3 starts this is very good

Ketzelkab responds:

Thanks, that means a lot man.

[Collapse]

You have a nice tone to your voice . I call this chillout music ...

The lyrics were not very well made though . I don't like how each verse ends on a short note .

The song itself is too short . You should aim for about 3 minutes . You can have more melody in between and just have 2 same lyrics on both sides .

I like it but it could have been much better

tallestrose responds:

Very constructive, I appreciate it. Thank you for this review.
I wanted something short in sweet because I never really composed chillout music before.

Though if you want something longer, I have a new track in the works... it will include many genres I've experimented with for the past months, and I aim for ten minutes. ^_^'

[Millenium]

21-22 When you using a loud effect try not to just drop it completely .

Too many sudden stops . Work on your transition .

You also switching between melodies too often .

Can't even call it a loop because its not consistent . Just trying to help don't hate . I won't rate

bdog705 responds:

if anything your not hating thanks for the feedback though