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DjGubkafish

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000-0:28 you had something going on but then it was all downhill from there.

When you use a melody for build up its better to progress with that same melody and build up sound around it . Also try not to use too much noisy instuments . Noise ok for some songs but it needs to be balanced so it dosen't claster the song .

Its too random for me give it a rating .

FortressLord responds:

Still 2 stars more than I would give it. Can't wait to move on to my new stuff.

It fits the 8-bit style well . Sounds just like NES game .

Although on Nes it would be rare to hear single instrument at a time . Usually theres always some background noise .

Good effort but i just don't like the melody that much

NerdRoll responds:

Thank u. but may I ask what you did not like about the melody? Was it too repetitive perhaps?

nice author comments XD I see you in a metal mood

i like this kind of music in gory games

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I like boobs. hahaha. And metal.
Cheers mang, glad you dig it.

I like the oldschool use of voices in background . Space exploration is the reason we have electronic music today .

For industrial style its justified but overall i just don't dig the melody . I think i would prefer if you took more melodic approach to this .

CrackMasterK responds:

Thanks for the feedback, you might like this then http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/525057

i like the contrast between melody and ambiance . By itself not very interesting but would be good for some project like animation or puzzle game

Helth responds:

Thanks for your time bro :)

I am not familiar with the original but violin and angelic pads sound pretty good .

ChronoNomad responds:

Thank you, DjGubkafish! Glad that you enjoy it. :)

as ambient music it works but its the same thing for 2 minutes .

More simplistic variations would be better .

DFerociousbeast responds:

yeah it is repetitive, but I really like it being that way, it helps for easy listening and you can zone out very easily. I don't intend to work on this anymore than I have but I will take this into account in the future so thanks for the comment :)

Lots of white noise but it does work with the song .

Its like being attacked by a boss in a video game .

I wish there was a melodic breakdown in the middle .

Anchorwind responds:

Thanks for taking the time to review. I'll take the "but it does work" with a smile.

Try using the piano chords

For example for a 4 step melody use 1,1,2,3 pattern . Like if you were using pads you could use 2 long same notes ,then use one lower note and then use one higher note .

You have 4 step melody but its the same 4 patterns if that makes sense . You could change hight of last 2 notes to make it sound more dynamic .

727411 responds:

That makes sense, and now that you mention it, is definitely something my music is lacking... Thanks for the feedback!

You ever herd Love lost long ago by Mr.Garrison?

probably no connection .

Anyway . It does sound like a rainy atmosphere . Good job

EqualEyes responds:

I have heard it! LOL. I just finished Stick Of Truth. I so sad it's over I hope they release DLC, ASAP! Thanks for the review man.

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